Oh! Lovely. I know it's not advanced critique, but..I love it! KH is a favorite of mine.

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I promise you: I'd go everywhere I've been to find a way to make atonement for my sins...

And see your smiling face again.

I think this is great. Awesome, in fact. There are still a couple of things, though. One, it's not really apparent what's going on until you get a really good look at it. I mean, his one arm's kinda hidden behind the rest of him, the rest of him being pretty much normal (where did his feet go?). So, if you're going to change it, make it more obvious, like both arms that are black or part of his legs or chest or a swirl of darkness around his face or something. Two, Sora's expression is also just a little too relaxed considering he's about to merge with a Heartless. You need to get a little more fear in there. Three, his hair is a little high up. Or rather, the point where it all starts spiking off from needs to be a little lower, closer to his forehead. Four, your background is a bit too bright. I think more of like a plum color would be better. Five, I REALLY like his yellow eye. KEEP the yellow eye. But change it, cause like half the white part's yellow and it looks kinda weird. Either make it so that the white part is all yellow, or all white. One or the other, but not both.

You have the beginning of something really, really on your hands, it just needs work. So keep at it. If you have to, ignore the deadline. Because I think you should make this the best it can just for your own sake, just because I think you can. So ganbatte ne? Good luck in the contest!

Thanks for the detailed response. I changed somethings, but I couldn't change the hair or his facial expression. @_@; *ish lazy* Better?

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very very cool

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Amazing. Not really much else to say.
Even though Sora didn't become naked when he turned into Anti-Sora. xD But that's just a minor detail that I'm sure no one is really going to complain about.

It's a pity he didn't. xD

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OOOOooo! That's awesome!!

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So that I do not have to see that star
So that I do not slit his throat"

*fangirls* OwO omg this is pretty......anyway! to the real comentary! this pic is beautiful (and not just 'cause i'm a crazed fan) if i had to be REALLY picky about something in it, it would only be the little heartless in the very bottom corner is a little too undefined. great work!

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MUCH. It's a helluva lot easier to tell what's going on now. I also like the tear you added in his left eye. Makes him seem a little more sad.

Nothing really to say here. Lovely picture! :3

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